Poetic Form: palindrome
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Always Eating
Food,
for dinnertime
always, talking though not eating.
Hungry as ever,
not listening,
filling mouths wide.
Crunch!
Wide mouths filling,
listening not
ever as hungry,
eating not talking though, always.
Dinnertime for
Food.
Well done! You were braver than me, I didn't even try the form, I was challenged enough with the theme!
ReplyDeleteSometimes that is even more of a challenge, Dawn. And wow! I enjoyed your fare from Day 18 (I had to check it). That's some powerful images, and way to stand up and speak out. I am proud of you.
DeleteGood for you!Perfect word for the bridge. Thank you. xoA
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annis! :-)
DeleteThis is an interesting form. I wasn't up to trying it, but I've enjoyed reading the works of those like you who did!
ReplyDeleteIt's definitely a challenge, and one that I have to be in the mood for. I'm glad that you enjoyed. I was worried that it would sound clouded and confusing. Glad that it didn't :-)
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