Writing Prompt: dancing with your muse
Poetic Form: pantoum
Feel the Rhythm
Feel the rhythm of the earth,
a loamy mass, pulsing life.
It can only get better
if you simply remove your shoes.
A loamy mass, pulsing life,
beating out a merry tune
if you simply remove your shoes,
you can tap along in time.
Beating out a merry tune
to maybe pass the afternoon,
you can tap along in time
gyrating all the while.
To maybe pass the afternoon,
in dance with your partner fair
gyrating all the while,
an hommage to the Muses Nine, you see.
In a dance with your partner fair,
she spins a wild abandon step
an hommage to the Muses Nine, you see
is where comes the poetry.
She spins a wild abandon step
is where comes the poetry
in a dance with your partner fair--
an hommage to the Muses Nine, you see.
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I love this line: "She spins a wild abandon step..." !
ReplyDeleteWell, Cindy, this is so cool. I love all the imagery and repeated lines. Everything flowed well. Thank you. xoA
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