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Showing posts with label storytelling. Show all posts
Showing posts with label storytelling. Show all posts

Saturday, October 7, 2023

Writober 2023 (7 days of micro fiction)

Day 1: Floating Mask in the Dark.
         Stanley was walking home from work. It was a typical after work night. It was dark, because of course is was, it was dark at five in the afternoon. He passed Mr. Lester’s house and then Mrs. Casey’s which was on the right. Mr. Lester’s walkway was lit up with those little sidewalk lamps. Mrs. Casey’s dog, Barkley, a shih tzu, weas barking.
           It was a typical day, I mean night, and an especially typical walk home with leaves blowing across the street and the standard neighbourhood noises of children screaming and dogs barking. Stanely would usually glance at the houses as he passed them, sometimes stopping to pet on of the many stray cats that lived in the colony next to Mrs. Casey’s house.
          The cats liked Stanley, especially the little grey cat with the blue green eyes. He would stop and feed the cats some of his leftover ham or chicken. Today there were no cat to be seen loitering on the sidewalk or in the colony, not even the little grey one. Suddenly, Barkley stopped barking!
            He stopped and looked around. The empty yard where the colony lived, he saw large and small glowing orbs floating in the yard. There were some that he could make out faces on, with eyes and some mouths.
            “Um, hello?” he called, but the face just floated and danced in the yard. “ Okay, I’ll leave you to it then,” he said, turning to walk away.
            “Okay, bye Stan,” said a voice, but when he turned the faces were gone.

Day 2: Woman and Cat with Glowing Eyes and Coffee
            FRIDAY at 7:57 pm.
            It had been a long week and the coffee maker was brewing. I can smell it; dark and nutty. I am leaning against the counter staring at the empty dining room and the boxes against the far wall. “Need to get to those boxes, Nyx,” I said to the yellow eyes on the counter.
            Nyx was staring at her, unblinking on the counter. “Mrrow,” said the white cat.
            “Yeah, my thoughts exactly. It can wait until morning.” Nyx turned at walked behind me. The coffee maker beeped.
             I turned with cup in hand to see the completed coffee and it was glowing red. “Mrrow,” said Nyx.
             “Um, Nyx?”
              Nyx walked to the edge of the conter, turned staring at me. Her eyes were now glowing green.
             “If you say so,” and I poured myself a cup. The cup lifted to my lips and I drank. The warmth rolling into my mouth, down my throat. I stopped.
              I turned back to the boxes against the wall and saw little dark mases open and closed the box lids. “Yeah, Nyx. It was wait until morning.”

Day 3: Guitar with Multiple Hand and Skulls.
          “Do you hear that?” asked George.
          “What?” asked Damon.
          “That!” as said George as he pointed out into the dark. “The music. Don’t you hear it?” George stood up, “Who’s playing the guitar at midnight?” trying to locate the direction of the wild guitar playing.
          “It’s after two in the morning, awfully close to the witching hour,” said Damon. “And it is coming from the graveyard on Silas Hill."
          “Oh stuff it, Damon. It’s Silent Hill, not Silas.”
           “No, it’s Silas Hill. Jerk. Up Birch Creek Road and named after Silas Hill, the founder of the town. Don’t you know your history?” Damon stood up and walked out into the dark leaving George alone in the circle of light of the small fire.
            “Where are you going?” asked George.
             Damon called behind him, “To investigate, you coming?”
             “Not fond of the dark, graveyards, or dying. So, no.”
             “Shuck off, George! There is no one up there,” called Damon as his voice disappeared into the dark.
             George stood along in the campfire light. Shadows were dancing around him. He listened to the guitar music, it was Spanish sounding with quick strumming and chords. It suddenly stopped, everything was still, “Damon?” called George, then a violin started playing and guitar resumed its frantic playing.

Day 4: Gas Mask Suit
             What do you do when you are home alone, watching scary movies in the dark and you hear a doorbell ring?
             Me? Well, my first thought is that I have no doorbell, so what the hell is that at my door?
             You stand, stretching, spilling the large metal bowl of popcorn across the couch. Your cat is unphased and continues to sleep. The TV is quietly playing some older zombie movie. You pull on your extra-large college sweatshirt and grab the nearest weapon, a volume of William Shakespeare. The cat is still snoozing.
             You slowly creep through the living room and towards the front door, but you don’t hear anything, except the movie still quietly playing on the TV, muffled speech and thumping. Then you hear a thumping from the front door. You stop.
             “Hellooooo?” you call to the door, as you are still not at the door. You walked into the vestibule and the doorbell rang again. The doorbell that shouldn’t exist. “Hi! Who’s there?” as to tightly grip the book in your hands. There is another quiet thump from the door. 
              At the door, you grab the light switch, setting down the book and grabbing the door handle. One, two, three…on goes the light and the door is flung open. No one is on the front stoop, but there is a loud thump coming from the living room. As you turn, you see a figure on the TV wearing a gas mask suit and the volume is turned way up.
              Your cat dashes from the couch.

Day 5: Fire Dancer
             All was quiet in the dance studio. Nellie closed the door and turned on a small lamp in the corner for some light. The light spread in a small circle around the polished wood floor. She turned on CIRCE and music floated down and across the floor in a rainbow of audio mosaic.
             “I wish I had someone to dance with,” said Nellie to the empty studio. The dim bluish light cast her shadow as it moved in time with her across the floor. She moved her feet. The drumming vibration of the music melted into the floor and lost to the movement of her feet.
            Tap. Tap. Swoosh. Nellie danced, losing herself to the music. Spin. Spin. Tap. Tap. She felt her body warming up as she moved. A smile spread across her face. The studio was no longer dark as she danced. The lamp light swirled like flames, making larger shadows that danced with Nellie.
            “Spin me,” she called.
             The walls blurred, the light blurred, even the music began to blur and started crackling like flames licking the walls of the studio.

Day 6: Decapitated Woman / Doll
           “Can you imagine the settee in the corner?” asked Cordelia.
           There was silence and then a rustle of fabric. “Oh, you’re no help,” she said. Another rustle, almost like a whisper, but unintelligible. Cordelia just sighed.
            There was a movement out of the corner of her eyes. She could still hear the rustling, but she didn’t see anything. “What are you doing?” asked Cordelia.
            No answer.
            “Just answer me! What are you doing?” Cordelia shouted. It was then that her view changed, spinning the velvet grey wallpaper into a blur. She shut her eyes.
             There was a thump and when she opened her eyes there in front of her was the green and gold settee, it was sitting in the corner. A hand waved in front of Cordelia. “Oh!”
              The hand turned Cordelia towards the headless torso of her own body.
               “Thanks!” said Cordelia.
               The torso bowed at the waist.
               “The settee does look good in the corner.”

Day 7: Rubix Cube with Eyes and Hands
            Laney had a Rubix Cube on her desk. It just sat there, untouched, with its rainbow of colours all jumbled up. She never played with it. Her aunt gave it to her when she was in the hospital.
            Laney wasn’t puzzle inclined, but her aunt had given it to her, and she loved her aunt. It was late and she couldn’t sleep. Her cat Chester was lying on her grey fuzzy pillow, breathing gently, relaxed. Laney was not relaxed, though her breathing was gentle. She suffered from insomnia since being in the hospital. Nothing seemed to help, not tea, music, meditation, alcohol, or pills. Even when Chester started sleeping in her room, she was only able to nap for maybe an hour.
             “Maybe I’ll try reading,” she said to a snoozing Chester. But the book was not interesting, nor did it make her sleepy. Laney laid the book on her desk and picked up the Rubix Cube. In the pale light of her desk lamp she studied the cube. She saw an eye on a green square. She touched it and the eye moved. “Whoa!” said Laney. “I think I need sleep,” but she moved the cube pieces, following the green eye, and then the eyes moved the blue square. This continued.
  
             In the morning her mom found Laney asleep on her bed with a complete cube in her hand.


Thursday, February 22, 2018

Black Mirror: A Review

I recently discovered a Netflix show, a Sci-Fi anthology based show, written and directed by Charlie Brooker, that so blew away my expectations of what is scary and what is possible. I am familiar with Brooker's previous works, Newswipe and Screenwipe that explain how the news, TV, and movies are presented to the public.

His approach to this show is different, and yet ultimatley familiar. Brooker make everything direct and ultimately funny, even if it the subject matter if not funny. He makes it real! He makes it scary.



A four season show, much of which Brooker has written, directed, and executive produced started in 2011 and take you for a ride. It's like a modern of the Twilight Zone, that features humans are the cause for the cruelty foisted upon themselves, usually. I would say Black Mirror was darker than The Twilight Zone, but truthfully, Rod Serling wrote many episodes designed to scare the people of the 1950s. Brooker is no exception. While not every episode always dark and foreboding, much of the show presents a bleak world where man tries  to master over the technology it has created. The best part is Black Mirror does not use AI (artificial intelligence) to bring mankind down the 'rabbit hole'.

The episode called Nosedive (and a personal favourite) features Lacie, an insecure office worker who is trying to boost her social media score to secure a posh apartment in Pelican Bay where they only accept you if you have a 4.5+ score. The entire world uses something designed to look like Facebook, it's eerily mirroring our own world, to share photos and rate other photos to garner favour with other, get the best stuff in life to get a higher score.

Episode Nosedive  - used for review purposes.
You see, in the world if you have a higher score, well then you have access to better housing, better rental cars, better friends. The worst your score is, the harder it is to get quality products or services, and the more people will look down on you. I think this is the most how our world is, when it matters what you have and who you know. Lacie is pushed to the brink trying to get to her friend Naomi's wedding when after a social score plunge meets Susan, a truck driver who had once had a 4.5 score and lost it all after her score failed to save her husband from Cancer. She tells Lacie that is is better to not cater to the system, because then you don't have to keep working to retain that score. In the end, (I won't spoil the ending here, Dear Readers. You to watch for yourself.) sometimes it is better to not worry about what others think, because you are still alive.

The scary part is the China already uses a system much like this. Read here for more China's Social Credit.

This episode features Bryce Dallas Howard (Lady in the Water) is a surprising well acted role, and the story is well developed and not contrived. The writing is really spot on taking the currently technology of the world and taking it to where it will likely be in the next ten minutes or next year. Scary, isn't it?

That is what I love about Black Mirror. the stories are related. You can understand why the character do what they do, even if you don't agree with them. They are real people.

A few of my favourite episodes include 15 Million Merits, The Entire History of You, White Christmas, White Bear, San Junipero, Shut Up and Dance, USS Callister, and Hang the DJ. All of the episodes are quality storytelling, in the vein of The Twilight Zone, but with the modern twist. Also, I must note that the new Doctor, (Doctor Who) Jodie Whittaker is feature in The Entire History of You, Jodie Foster directed Arkangel.

Subjects that are touched on in Black Mirror: controlling people for personal gain, social media scoring, retribution of family, using people's DNA for your own fantasies, and social media justice. If any of this interests you, then you definitely should check out Black Mirror. If you like amazing quality storytelling, then Black Mirror is for you. If you like weird things, then Black Mirror is for you.

What TV shows and or Movies have you been watching, Dear Reader? What books are you currently reading? I am currently enjoying Netflix's Bill Nye Saves the World, and Garth Nix's The Keys to the Kingdom series. (Lady Friday) Leave me some love below, Dear Readers.

Used for review purposes.
Used for review purposes.













Up next a look at Children's Literature. I am currently submitting two of my children's picture book stories to publishers and part of my research involves reading current children's book that are on the shelves of bookstores everywhere and looking at what what I read as a child (I had quite the collection back in the day).


Wednesday, December 14, 2016

Moana: A Brief Review!

There are few movies that strike a chord within me, especially in Disney movies, in such a way that I am happy to live on this planet. Okay, that's a strange statement, yes. First, it's not that I don't love Disney movies, but after watching Moana, I felt a surge of pride that the stories they are telling are worthy to tell.

Maui and Moana
See I grew up with Disney movies. There were the ones that I was constantly watching, like Robin Hood, The Jungle Book, Dumbo, and Cinderella. These are the stories of my youth, but they were the most powerful told stories. This isn't a slam against the animators on these movies. They were good movies, but there came a time when you wanted something powerful. It wasn't until Beauty and the Beast, that came out in 1991, that I saw Disney trying to tell stories with a purpose. The Little Mermaid was a fantastic movie and is the beginning of what many have dubbed 'The Disney Renaissance', but it wasn't until Beauty and the Beast that something sparked.

Not every modern Disney sparks my soul and promotes strong feminine roll models, or tell a thrilling and/or beauty story, but recently Disney has found it's stride. Brave, a story about a strong willed girl and her mother and finding yourself (not really a love story), Frozen, a story about sisterly love more than romantic love, and finding yourself, and now, Moana, a story of finding your place and not falling into the rolls that have been carved out for us, thus, finding yourself. These are stories that I love, and that I want my nieces and all children to have access to. They are also becoming strong contenders to be called the new classics (at least in my universe).

In the last few years there has been more stories featuring stories and legends from different cultures. I think that is great! The Grimm's fairy tales, of olden days are find, but that it is important to see the story that shape ALL of us. This is a main reason that Moana has become my new favourite story.

Moana, the stories of a pacific islander girl, who challenges her world and defies the rules by traveling across the barrier reef, searching for Maui, the demi-god who stole the heart of Tafiti (the mother goddess that created all of the lands of the ocean), and therefore began to tear the world apart. Moana, has to brave the dangers of the open sea and those within herself to reunite Tafiti with her heart. Kinda a dual life lesson there, eh Disney?

And then you have music written by Lin Manuel Miranda, the creator of Hamilton, a American Musical. Music in a movie can make a story more profound, and the song, We Know the Way, is about as profound as you can get, telling the story of Moana's heritage and her peoples travels to discover new lands; and there's How Far I'll Go, sung by Moana, yearning for something more, feeling just a little out of place, much is the way that Belle (Reprise) calls out Belle's desire for something greater.

How Far I'll Go

I've been standing at the edge of the water
Long as I can remember
Never really knowing why
I wish I could be the perfect daughter
But I come back to the water
No matter how hard I try...

I can talk about each of these songs and great length, but the point is that the songwriters knew what they were doing in building a story with music and words, from the love of a Gramma Tala to her granddaughter, and your pride within yourself, Moana to her people. Even the Shiny song, with the David Bowie-esque Crab pulls at your core. Although, it is less about personal growth and just a bad ass song.

Moana is a worthy addition to the Disney pantheon, and is definitely NOT A PRINCESS! She is a girl, designed to look like a girl, and voiced/sung by an ACTUAL 16 year old Hawaiian teenager. There are so many things that Disney got right. Also, Hei-Hei the chicken is voiced by Alan Tudyk (from Firefly). Hear the fan girl/fan boy squeeing (you're welcome, Sara)!!

If you get a chance to see Moana, please do. It is worth the watch!

Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Movie Review: Deadpool

I want it on the record, I knew next to nothing about Deadpool prior to seeing this movie. Nothing.Except that I had seen X-Men Origins: Wolverine, which features a very different. That was an INTERESTING movie, to say the least. Portrayed much differently with a sewn shut mouth and mutant powers from each of the X-Men making me quite the adversary.

I rather like the mouthy, sword and gun toting version better.

Also, I need to say that I am REALLY behind on my superhero movies. So this is a really an impromptu review.

First, I am not normally a Ryan Reynolds fan, but he was the best smart ass as Wade Wilson, AKA Deadpool. Okay, there will probably be spoilers her, Dear Readers. Point is this movie was really effin' good.

I love a good linear story, but something about a story that jumps from past to present reminds me of the way I write sometimes. You see, I have written a few stories where the main protagonist is set in one time line, and then jumps to a either a different protagonist or a different time with the same protagonist . So, it made sense when Deadpool would jump back to an earlier time to explain an earlier point my brain could actually follow the story. The movie is more of an origins story and less and adventure based story, yet the movie doesn't suffer for it. I found that I could connect with Wade, Vanessa, and even Francis. It was well thought out and even well presented.

Something that I enjoyed and usually don't enjoy if not done well is the breaking of the fourth wall. It is so easy to have a character just start talking to the audience, Dear Readers, but it is hard to make it believable and NOT annoying. I remember a children's theatre that featured a character that broke the fourth wall and it annoyed me the whole time I was watching. Never mind that the rest of the show was good and the kids acted their little hearts out, but to have a character (a stage manager character too) just burst out about how their job is not going well and the actors are ruining the show put a bit of a damper on the story that was already in progress. Now, I must point out that the young lady playing the stage manager was trying her hardest, but it is hard to convey fourth wall breakage well. Deadpool breaks the fourth wall quite a bit and used a lot of humour, but not in every scene, or in every moment. It felt almost natural, and you were expecting it. I thought this helped the movie's case, as I would have just responded to Deadpool's queries or comment as if I was there with him on the bridge or in the car on the highway. While in that children's show it was awkward, random, and unnecessary.

Note: fourth wall breaking is usually used in improv games and dinner theatre. Although not exclusively, I have experienced fourth wall breaking in these circumstances.

I could tell that Ryan Reynolds has a passion for Deadpool, with his impish delight and passion, that is what really made me enjoy Deadpool. I also liked the humour. There is something amusing about a character who is so vulgar. Not a movie for anyone under 13, hell, maybe under 16, but entertaining and much different than the standard fare now-a-days.

See, as I stated before I am really behind on my superhero movie. But Deadpool is less a superhero movie and more an action movie. Deadpool is not a superhero, but a anti-hero. This doesn't mean he is a villain, but in a world where most action adventure movies have a hero and a villain, it is nice to have a protagonist (protagonist) who is less like a superman and more like a man with special abilities. I applaud Marvel for their choices with this movie. It helped. I hope for more stories that test what we know about stories, heroes, and villains. But at the same time I hope that this isn't the new normal. It was suggested by Red Letter Media (guys who do fun reviews) that maybe this concept/style could become the new trend in movies. Watch their Half in the Bag review of Deadpool. I rather hope that it is used sparingly so as to not wear out the possibilities.

 One Comic Book version of N.T Warhead
Movie version of N. T. Warhead
Overall verdict: If you are old enough, then yes, yes, you should see this movie. From a storytelling perceptive it is unique story, from a unique perspective. Yes, there is a lot of vulgarity, but really that never took away from the story. Something a little different to break up the monotony of superhero movies, comics, books, etc. Also, I love a good and flawed character and Wade Wilson is flawed and funny for all the right reasons. And you get a little (and I mean little bit of X-men with Colossus and Negasonic Teenage Warhead, who is an actual X-Man). And they also changed her powers and persona quite a bit. Read a bit about her at Comic Vine.

Have you seen Deadpool, Dear Readers? What kind of movies do you like? Do you like something a little different for the normal? Favourite superhero or anti-hero? Favourite villain? Leave a comment below and show me shown love. Peace!