I need to point out that sometimes I edit my posts the day after. My brain sometimes go faster than my fingers, so I will always spot correct my grammar. Always! I will not take offense if someone comments on it. I just needed to state this.
Today's prompt leads well into a theme that I clearly started, and maybe, if I try hard enough, I can finish the month with. The theme is thunderstorms. Yesterday's poem was also about a storm. So...let's try something. I don't usually try to stick with a theme, but something told me to, one mustn't disobey the muse when it calls.
Also, this is an ode. I don't try to write in ode-style, but I feel that it leads itself well to my, often, rambles. Enjoy today poetic fare...
Ode to A Few Moments
One moment,
It feels like an eternity
When the air is still,
Stagnant,
It feels like wearing too tight of a scarf
And you are clutching,
Grasping,
Reaching
For the next breath.
One moment
That you wish to last forever,
But in a flash,
Of lighten-ing
It is gone,
But oh, how it felt,
To breathe
To be alive,
Electric,
Stretching wide
In those brief moments.
One moment,
Stretching into more
In the passing storm,
Echoing thunder,
Sharp and biting,
Alive and asleep,
Real and unreal,
Make this storm the best time of my life.
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